Re Editing

We re edited our production using the footage we got from Shaunagh's house. This time the opeing flowed more successfully, we changed our ending slightly so now it's Harry smoking the cigarette at the end, instead of Bethan crying at the memorial. When we watched it through Bethan came up with the idea that at the very end after the Honey Bear title comes up we should have Bethan who plays Poppy's mother shouting "Poppy, it's time to get up for school" this is so it gives the idea that the story continues and doesn't just end when the opening does.