Peer Assesment of the first cut

The camerawork was very unsteady for the shot with the photo of Shaunagh, so we have decided to re shoot that shot by doing two separate shots. We will do that by looking at the whole picture and zooming in an separate shot.The pace of the film was very slow, especially with the scene in Poles Lane, we have decided to cut down the scene so you only have the views of Shaunagh closer to the camera. In addition we still have to get the A-team correct with Shaunagh's voice over, we found out how to change the volume of the sound so we can play the A-team while Shaunagh is speaking. Also some of the camera sound is too loud e.g. the wind, we have also decided to turn the volume of this down as well

Group improvements:- Re-shoot photo frame shot as it is too jerky in the first cut
- Add in a new shot to make it clear Poppy's dead.. Maybe a knife to represent stabbing
- Another shot of Harry to go with the voice-over of when Shaunagh blames her downfall on 'him' to make it look more matching.